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Selfish Mom
Author: SEVERUSMAX
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(Added on Mar 1, 2006)
(This month 67178 readers) (Total 83089 readers) |
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It is a futuristic lesbian bondage/rape story,pretty much, with a selfish mother being frequently raped by her roommate while under house arrest. She eventually likes it and loves her Mistress,consenting to being enslaved |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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Rating:  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Mar 12, 2006 |
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A pretty fair start to the tale, good writing style and clearly drawn characters.
Let's see where it goes! It sure would be better, however, if all the type were the same size... (7/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 11, 2006 |
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i love the way you put the story together about the way Jane is treated that what happens to her is of no concern to thers she is on her own, as things go now it is possible that this coule become reality someday,either here or there (8/10)
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pet10
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Mar 2, 2006 |
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The style is good and it is a witty idea, but I don’t understand why this electronic monitor hasn’t a bug. The authorities can espy the interior of old cottage easily such abuses are risky….
(8/10)
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- Replied by:
SEVERUSMAX
(Edit) (Mar 7, 2006)
- They don't CARE about such abuses, and Jane knows it. They have more important fish to fry. Besides, she only wears the monitor OUTSIDE the house. It is for when she leaves for work and errands. The regime takes the typical view of the authorities toward convicted felons: too bad for them, but they broke the law! Thanks for the feedback, though.
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Mar 2, 2006 |
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Excellent story. Little slow in the beginning and pity that it just stops.. when it is becoming most interesting and sexual. Suspect you will write more?
Anyway I believe it can be worked out further. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
redhot33
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Mar 1, 2006 |
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Very good story Master! I'm glad you finally got your first story up! (10/10)
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rebelfan1
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Mar 1, 2006 |
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You have great writing skills, but I did not like this story. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Blackbird
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Mar 1, 2006 |
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OMFG!!! I LOVE this story!!!! Oh jesus yes!!!!! Thank you for creating such a familiar, odious character and giving her the business! (9/10)
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