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Recruiting Victoria
Author: Gina Hoisington
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(Added on Oct 8, 2005)
(This month 165790 readers) (Total 282425 readers) |
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A young woman is kidnapped in the Caribbean by a team recruiting slaves for wealthy man. She is roughly treated in preparation for her impending slavehood. |
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Jocke40
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Nov 2, 2016 |
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One of the best stories I ever red. (10/10)
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DeGrinch
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Oct 11, 2007 |
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Excellent, Wish there was more. (10/10)
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Mothbrad
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Apr 5, 2007 |
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Great, very long story that I have not yet read fully. I especially enjoyed the description of the 'promotional video', which nicely showed her growing degradation. (9/10)
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masteralex_48_49
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Jan 7, 2007 |
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I really enjoyed this s tory. Its the best one I have read on here. Can not wait to erad moer of your work. Take Care Alex (10/10)
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Michael Fuhs
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Feb 12, 2006 |
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It´s simply amazing. Very daring and extremely well written. Please post the other parts as soon as possible. I´m really looking forward to read more of your stuff!
I´ve just read part of the the update. Simply brilliant. This story has a potential for causing an addiction. I call it literature. (10/10)
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Kira
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Feb 12, 2006 |
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great story love to see an continuing. (10/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Feb 10, 2006 |
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I thought this story was brilliantly written. The reader is able to get into the heads of almost all the characters. While I don't buy into the notion that kidnap and rape victims turn into these sluts, I do that your writing skills make it possible to believe. The only negative I found with this story had to do with the formatting of some paragraphs and I don't think this was your error, but the person who imported your story to this site.
Good job! (10/10)
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Auggie'sSlave
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Oct 26, 2005 |
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MORE please...where is the end of the story.. not fair... big tease... I want the end... pretty please... (10/10)
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Mad Lews
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Oct 22, 2005 |
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Well written, well thought out, vivid details and a reasonably believable plot. Much better than the average NC story please go on.. (9/10)
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cdacat
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Oct 22, 2005 |
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Well...what csr said below. I can honestly say that for the many years I've been frequenting the BDSM Library, this is the best nc story I've read. Your excellent work makes sifting through all the poorly written garbage that makes it onto this site worth it. This should be a Library prerequisite -- required reading for anyone who even thinks about submitting a story, to let everyone know the standards to live up to before subjecting fiction to the general population. Thank you, thank you, thank you for such an enjoyable read, and please, don't keep us waiting too long for your next story. (10/10)
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csr
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Oct 20, 2005 |
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In comparison with most of the stories on this site, this one is truly outstanding. Not only does it portray erotic scenes of titillating non-consensual sex and punishment, but it keeps the reader in tune with the victim's state of mind and psychological factors.
My only criticism of the author is that she now has raised the bar around here and my ability to endure the bad spelling, grammar and 900-word paragraphs of many of the other authors has decreased. Keep up the great work! (10/10)
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monk
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Oct 13, 2005 |
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Excellent. Sex is in the mind although the master has a huge apparatus. Please continue. There are hints that suggest that the master could be mastered by his willing slave. (10/10)
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La Toya
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Oct 12, 2005 |
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Great Writing. (10/10)
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subelly
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Oct 11, 2005 |
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I loved the story and hope that you will carry on with it,
Thakyou. (10/10)
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joepro
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Oct 10, 2005 |
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I enjoyed reading your story . It is very well written. (10/10)
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iggygor
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Oct 10, 2005 |
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Very well written. Hope more chapters are coming soon.
(10/10)
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Wolfshayde
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Oct 9, 2005 |
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the writer maintains a wonderful balance of physical force vs pyschology in the training of young victoria, that one would think she had actually gone through this herself. Additionally her perspective from both the trainee's and the Dominant's mindsets are superb. keep up the great work. (10/10)
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slutsteph
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Oct 9, 2005 |
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So well written! i watch as M is conquered. i feel with M. i become M in my mind. Great job! (9/10)
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tstruck
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Oct 9, 2005 |
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Wow, intense story, very nicely written. It is reminiscent of Story of O insofar as it seems to be infused with a woman's sensitibities. I seem to agree with everyone else: Overall Excellent, Gina!! (10/10)
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yosaure
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Oct 9, 2005 |
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Thanks. Very good.
Plese, continue. (10/10)
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englishman
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Oct 9, 2005 |
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Superb, at last someone who knows how to write in an erotic, exciting way, please, please continue with this fabulous story (10/10)
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spiceygal
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Oct 9, 2005 |
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Very well written and sooo erotic! I could picture everything in my mind with your excellent descriptions. Can hardly wait for more! (9/10)
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mkemse
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Oct 8, 2005 |
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great so far, hope you plan to add more (9/10)
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castle2001
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Oct 8, 2005 |
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Very good tale of kidnapping and slave training.Please continue into her new life. (9/10)
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fantazmaster
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Oct 8, 2005 |
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An excellent first story submission with some very well illustrated scenes and character interaction. (9/10)
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