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    Cindy's World
    
    Author: Tallus
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    (Added on Sep 28, 2005)
            (This month 67839 readers) (Total 113846 readers) | 
   
   
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    Teen's father know what women are for. And he's got the temper and the buddies to show them.  | 
   
 
 
   
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    ramses
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    Oct 5, 2008 | 
   
   
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        Very enjoyable (chapter 2)  (9/10) 
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    mkemse
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    Jul 21, 2008 | 
   
   
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        the story was enjoyable it did not offer and shock value but it was still enjoyable to read, by shock value i mean it did not contain anything  a reader was not expecting to see and that nothing suddendly happened, hope t see more like this from you (8/10) 
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    mike uk reader
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    Feb 25, 2006 | 
   
   
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        Only when I consider a story needs a very special mention and precious approval do I personally enter here in the story reviews (Cindy's World)by this author "Tallus" is one of them he has great talent indeed in weaving a hellish erotic story of a fathers extreme abuse of his daughter with a helping hand from his likewise friends even the unfortunate girls mother must obey all commands given. I sincerely hope there will be more chapters  soon and to save her-self more punishment the girls mother is made to be more involved in Cindy's training for the pleasure of the men. Looking For More........ (10/10) 
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    chooky_104
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    Feb 25, 2006 | 
   
   
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        Good story. Rough slavery is always a good read. (6/10) 
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    lex ludite
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    Oct 7, 2005 | 
   
   
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        This well written effort is nasty ,brutal and just what the doctor ordered for those of us into such things. I look forward to more of Cindy's adventures. (7/10) 
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    La Toya
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    Sep 29, 2005 | 
   
   
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        They story would have been better with some more information, as Carrieanne stated. (6/10) 
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    heycarrieanne
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    Sep 28, 2005 | 
   
   
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        The story itself was written quite well, but a little bit of background info would have been appreciated.  But I look forward to reading more. (7/10) 
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