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Jess the Maid
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Sep 21, 2005)
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Jess the Maid comes in and finds her employer and wife being dominated by a black hooker. She decides why not her. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 11, 2008 |
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on par with most of your work (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Sep 22, 2005 |
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So more work on development but I must say that the author has improved since he started posting. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Sep 21, 2005 |
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Completely unremarkable except for the poor grammar, akward style and ubelievable premise. The story flow feels bulky, like a square peg trying to slip into a round hole. It just doesn't work. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
GarrickBailley
(Edit) (Sep 24, 2005)
- you have two spelling mistakes in a review where you bash the author's grammar. Interesting.
- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Sep 24, 2005)
- I was not aware that perfection was necessary when postng a review. Perhaps I will put my reviews through a spell check instead of just providing an honest review. But, I thank you for your review of my own review.
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