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Her Pain for His Pleasure
Author: Michelle
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(Added on Jul 27, 2005)
(This month 38497 readers) (Total 72880 readers) |
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Michelle looks for the perfect, sadistic dom to compliment her intense need for torture, pain and humiliation. She finds one via the internet ... |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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fitzgilbert
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Feb 26, 2010 |
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Une suite serait necessaire. (8/10)
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magnum
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Jul 31, 2006 |
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I really enjoyed the story. Thank! (8/10)
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jip
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Feb 20, 2006 |
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Good story (8/10)
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Road Warrior
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Sep 19, 2005 |
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Enjoyed it and look forward to more chapters. (8/10)
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LordVetinari
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Aug 7, 2005 |
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Interesting beginning. I hope there is more to come. (8/10)
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David S
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Aug 7, 2005 |
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Great thoughts and looking to read the follow-on. Keep up the story and good writting. (8/10)
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delish
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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This is a good first effort, Michelle. You do have a descriptive style that I believe will blossom with practise. You need to work on your grammar and punctuation- perhaps consider asking someone to review/proofread your story before you submit it. I am looking forward to hearing more from you. (5/10)
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guild762
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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I like the premise of your tale immensely, Michelle, though I must admit I'm impatient for you to continue. Don't listen to anyone who says they'd prefer an NC angle; I love the fact that she's into this stuff. ;) (8/10)
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chooky_104
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Jul 30, 2005 |
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My God.. YOu described me to a tee... Cant wait for more. (8/10)
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La Toya
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Jul 29, 2005 |
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For your first posting here you did great job. Now I just have to remember were I post the duck tape, and then have a little talk mith my sub. :) (7/10)
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Mad Lews
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Jul 28, 2005 |
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Ahh yes a pain slut who enjoys it all a little too much. What is a true sadist to do? Hard to say which direction this one is going but I'm sure we'll all enjoy the tale as it progresses. ( A little bit of trouble keeping the tenses in order but with all the gory detail I really didn't care) (8/10)
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Ruby
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Jul 28, 2005 |
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And that was only fantasy. Hmmm...our subby has quite a creative mind when it comes to the torture she craves. I'm looking forward to her meeting with the dom. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Jul 27, 2005 |
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I think you have a good premise for your story, but your writing is a bit stilted and doesn't flow well. It may just take time for you to warm up to your story and be less clinical. Good luck! (6/10)
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- Replied by:
heycarrieanne
(Edit) (Aug 3, 2005)
- The grammar and punctuation is even worse on the new chapter you just posted. The distraction of all those commas and semi-colons was so strong that I could not follow the story!
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mkemse
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Jul 27, 2005 |
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very well done, my type of story would have liked a NC theme but that's ok (8/10)
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