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Neighborly Duty
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Jun 25, 2005)
(This month 54162 readers) (Total 66923 readers) |
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Mother is captured by neigbor son while suntaning. His mom and her daughter joins in. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 26, 2005 |
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Interesting concept, i plan to raise my review as soon as you add more i see where you are going to go (7/10)
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