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International Relations
Author: C. Lakewood
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(Added on Jun 3, 2005)
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Dr. Catherine Cardiff, a 31-year-old college professor, falls under the influence of her Japanese graduate assistant. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Jun 15, 2005 |
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Nicely done, as usual. This story has potential for some significant expansion, which I trust you are considering. I wish other writers would pay attention to your compact style and the way you employ your vocabulary; it is a treat to this reader's eye and intellect. (9/10)
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chksng19
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Jun 6, 2005 |
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A little rough at the start: an editor might be able to help smooth it out to the point the prof flees. Beyond that, well written (though always frustrating for me to have a frustrated sub.... guess I'm too nice a dom).
Good job. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
C_Lakewood
(Edit) (Jun 6, 2005)
- I'm unable to understand exactly what you mean
by a "little rough at the start." Perhaps you
would be good enough to suggest ways in which I
might "smooth it out."
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Jun 5, 2005 |
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Excellent story and plot. The plot was developed and well told. (8/10)
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jth215
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Jun 5, 2005 |
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Very very interesting (9/10)
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(8/10)
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rainbow001
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Jun 4, 2005 |
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Very nice read. Thanks for posting. Looking forward to more. (8/10)
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