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Southern Nights
Author: Tantala
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(Added on Apr 19, 2005)
(This month 107608 readers) (Total 149781 readers) |
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Mary finds she needs a change in her life, and decide to do something about it. As she get in contact with a young girl named Linda, she suddenry realises that even her wildest fantasies actually just might come true.... |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Perrin
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Apr 19, 2007 |
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Good, well-written. Does get slightly monotonous after a while. A bit more care with the names in the last chapter especially would be nice. (7/10)
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sopor aeternus
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Dec 13, 2006 |
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wow,what shall I say,I am speechless.
the story is good and the auther is simply awesome (10/10)
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ms2bused
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Aug 28, 2005 |
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Tantala is one of the most sensual writers I have ever come cross, All his stories are totally breathetaking! I only wish there were an entire library of them for I detest reaching the end of each chapter then the agony of wait between! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 21, 2005 |
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Nice story. It would be nice if the writer is planning to tell about the vacation they take together (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jacen
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Apr 21, 2005 |
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I enjoyed this story, and wish I could rate it higher. Some of the phrases are a bit odd, which makes me suspect that a lot of the English came either from a non-native speaker, or a thesarus. And the over use of punctuation makes me think he/she learned English in a teen chat room online. Exclamation! Points! Should! Be! Used! Very! Sparingly! Cut out at least half (probably three fourths of them would be better) and that would bump the story up at least a point. And multiples, such as !! and ?!? are just no-no's. And the time shifts were a bit jarring.
But I do like this one. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 20, 2005 |
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good story but average at the same time (7/10)
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