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Thackeray Manor
Author: Alex B.
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(Added on Apr 16, 2005)
(This month 9285 readers) (Total 20723 readers) |
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Travel back to 18th century London and witness punishment day for the servants at the home of Lord and Lady Thackeray. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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Apr 18, 2005 |
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I have no idea how this odd formatting occur either. Unfortunately, as it stands, it’s just not a smooth read. But I still enjoyed it. There seemed to a little confusion about the Lord and Lady’s titles, which may bother some more pedantic readers. Otherwise, like Breannefun, I thought this was a ‘cute and light story’. Story? Well, to me, it was more of a cheeky vignette – no pun intended. In fact how anyone could become ‘bored’ when reading less than 3,000 words is, quite frankly, a mystery to me. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 17, 2005 |
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A very well done tail. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Breannefun
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Apr 16, 2005 |
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Okay, let me preface this by saying that I AM a corporal punishment fan, so I didn't notice grammarical mistakes or sentence and paragraph structure. I thought this was a cute light story specifically for spanking. With that in mind, it was well done.
(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Apr 16, 2005 |
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An enjoyable tale. I for one had no dificulty with the format but you may want to try more traditional paragraphs so as not to confuse some of our more traditional readers (7/10)
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lex ludite
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Apr 16, 2005 |
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The quirky format did a good job of frustrating this reader. I have no idea how this happened, but the story suffered greatly from dropped sentences in every other tiny paragraph. For those into corporal punishment, especially spankings, this may prove acceptable despite the formating difficulties. This reader was rather bored with it all except for the ending which I did enjoy. (5/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 16, 2005 |
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the story wasok, but ihave always had a issue with ertocia that is from the past, but the story was still enjoyable (7/10)
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