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Spider and the Fly
Author: C. Lakewood
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(Added on Feb 18, 2005)
(This month 59600 readers) (Total 80912 readers) |
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Bethany, who is in the process of making a series of bad decisions, is outwitted by Rhoda. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (8/10) |
Average
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Highest
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Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 15, 2010 |
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A bit of an overlong introduction in which every detail of the 'current situation' is explained. However, once the preliminaries out of the way, "Spider And The Fly" is a delight of clever deceit, manipulation and humiliating situations. Great read, as of the 5th paragraph. JJ (9/10)
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Reviewer:
Martini_Guy05
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Mar 29, 2005 |
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A great story, the idea of having a younger girl dominate an older girl, who is supposedely an authority figure is just great (9/10)
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Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Feb 21, 2005 |
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An enjoyable tale with a few disturbing plot lines and a nasty twist at the end. Great read and well executed (9/10)
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Reviewer:
Mr_Cruel_One
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Feb 20, 2005 |
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I loved this story. I encourage the writer to continue this story. The topic of age play/regression, NC, humiliation aspect was delight to read. (9/10)
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