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    Rachel
    
    Author: Allene Blake
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    (Added on May 10, 2001)
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    The girl is madly in love with man nearly loses him from jealousy and begs to be whipped to prove she is sorry. This leads on to more. | 
   
 
 
   
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    | Reviewer: 
    BigCat
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    Jun 17, 2005 | 
   
   
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        Very good consensual pain/whipping story. Moves well. Never lags at all. Very hot. Very good example of this genre. More? (9/10) 
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    Jones, Nikka
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    Nov 17, 2003 | 
   
   
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        Very good story. Though the level of realism that Allene achieved in "Debbie" is lacking, the whipping scenes are very exciting. Leaves the reader wanting more. (9/10) 
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    Tim_Id
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    Jun 7, 2003 | 
   
   
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        It is indeed one of the best. I especially like the scene where the shop owner is demonstrating his wears. Could use proofreading, but still an quick read. (10/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    kaleun76
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    Oct 21, 2002 | 
   
   
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        I have to wonder why no reviews. This is probably one of the best 10 stories I've read. It is well written; the progression is steady and credible. It is hot. It is consensual. I cannot find anything to improve on it. Please maam, may I have some more. (10/10) 
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