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Shannon's Ascension
Author: Thomas Chaser
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(Added on Jan 8, 2005)
(This month 37549 readers) (Total 63632 readers) |
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A beautiful college co-ed is hired for a very special modeling job that requires a gynecological exam and leads to her awakening her sexuality through bondage. Nipple clamps, water, a rack, and the most devilish "pear" are used on her tightly bound body in front of a live audience. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
claire
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Aug 2, 2014 |
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Very well written. Unlike earlier stories, it felt complete. The set up was there and it continued through with the torture. Liked it a lot. Good fuel for my future fantasies. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
cerebro
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Oct 10, 2012 |
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this story is "no consent" but human remains,thanks Shannon's pleasure (10/10)
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- Replied by:
skullchaser
(Edit) (Oct 12, 2012)
- Thank you for the positive input. :)
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| Reviewer:
lil dragon
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Jan 14, 2005 |
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thanks for this one! i really enjoyed this, believable characters, hit all the right notes - i would love to find a 'job' like this!! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
skullchaser
(Edit) (Jan 14, 2005)
- I'm glad you liked it. I tried to keep it somewhat believable (or rather, as believable as these types of stories can be). Who knows, maybe someday a forward-thinking university will support such a lecture series! :)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jan 9, 2005 |
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I wanted to give this one a '10', but in the end I held back because the whole position the girl is hired for is bogus. It has no educational value and exists for titillationary purposes only. If the doctor had been using her as a demonstrator model to sell his equipment, that would be a lot more believable. Make no mistake, though, this is an excellent story, and the dedication to Iphigenia makes its pedigree plain. You can both be proud of this one. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
skullchaser
(Edit) (Jan 9, 2005)
- You may be right, but when I was sitting in class listening to my Crim professor drone on about the history of laws and punishment, I thought "This would be alot more interesting if there was a beautiful model here to demonstrate some of this stuff." Some of us prefer visual learning. :)
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| Reviewer:
longrover
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Jan 8, 2005 |
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A believable story with a good protagonist and effective supporting cast. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
skullchaser
(Edit) (Jan 9, 2005)
- Thank you. I tried to keep the plot as something that could be possible, given the right circumstances. I'm glad you liked the way I had the characters interact. If I ever get around to writing a sequel, I may develop Carolyn's character a bit more.
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| Reviewer:
Mike17
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Jan 8, 2005 |
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Excellent story! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
skullchaser
(Edit) (Jan 8, 2005)
- Thank you for the enthusiastic response! I'm glad my work is appreciated. Thanks for giving the story the highest rating possible. :)
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| Reviewer:
Sally J
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Jan 8, 2005 |
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Believable heroine. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
skullchaser
(Edit) (Jan 8, 2005)
- Thank you! I spent a fair amount of time (perhaps too much) trying to give her a personality and a background. I find that I'm more interested in stories where there's some feeling of familiarity between myself (as a reader) and the main character. Cardboard figures are too easy to lose interest in.
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