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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
(Edit) |
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Jan 13, 2005 |
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Interesting concept and very creative. I like the touch of realism (and only a touch at that) for food and water. Cramps, numbness and other physical maladies that would actually come from the treatment aren't too erotic and should continue to be ignored. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ruby
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Jan 4, 2005 |
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Wonderful fantasy with just a touch of reality. Great idea and certainly many things can happen to the angel. The writing style makes this easy to read and enjoy.
-- Notes to author: Yes, it's a fantasy, but if you take the time to feed, water and empty the angel, you must convey her other physical needs.
She wants to scream? She would be screaming, gag or no. The angel can make plenty of noise with her O-ring gag.
If they don't let her move - foot/leg/arm cramps are going to be a huge problem.
And let's give those nipples a break. Blood circulation is important for all body parts.
That said - I'm looking forward to new chapters.
Please keep going. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
michelle05
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Jan 2, 2005 |
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This was a great story enjoyed by all! (8/10)
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Cokera
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Dec 19, 2004 |
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Perfect for the time of year. I really enjoyed it. Although it is not a reality type work, I want to read more. I really enjoyed the concept!!! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Dec 18, 2004 |
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Great story. Quite erotic, and at least as intriguing in what it doesn't say as in what it does. Well worth a read. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Barbara Anne
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Dec 18, 2004 |
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Not enough time was spent during the introduction sequence. Authors' [limited] descriptive language spoiled this preparation, for ultimate enjoyment. Far too impersonal, with many opportunities lost, to captivate readers attention. Suggest [several] re-reads, prior to submitting for publication, to iron out all your grammatical bugs. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
stormbringer
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Dec 18, 2004 |
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it was good, although I prefer stories a little more to the reality is interesting concept. Looking forward to reading more (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 18, 2004 |
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outstanding, love the whole concept, hope you plan to add more chapters (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Relevart_Emit
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Dec 18, 2004 |
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Nice pacing, and a rather interesting way to spend 12 days. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Breannefun
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Dec 18, 2004 |
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Wow! How creative! Makes me wish I could be a tree ornament myself! My only recomendation is that more attention be given to the main character's feelings, state of mind, stuff like that. Other than that, it was really good. Thanks! (9/10)
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