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The Steel Collar
Author: Steele
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(Added on Dec 11, 2004)
(This month 98545 readers) (Total 207483 readers) |
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A successful accountant falls victim to a slaver's unusual recruitment policy. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 14, 2010 |
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Exemplary storytelling with great characterizations, inventiveness by the truckload and a decent storyline, make this a wonderful read.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
jamb
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Sep 7, 2006 |
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Brilliant. I love Poppy's inner anguish, as well as the way she is turned into a slave - I hope this one isn't over... (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Steele
(Edit) (Sep 8, 2006)
- Thanks for the feedback and the score. Don't worry there's a few more chapters to go.
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| Reviewer:
littleone_
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Jul 10, 2006 |
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Definately one of the better capture/train/enslave a girl stories I've read. The author has a good use of vocabulary, the ability to create an immage and let you get into the mind of his central character. Depending on the ending this story could work its way up to 10 in the ratings. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Steele
(Edit) (Jul 10, 2006)
- Thanks for the feedback. Despite the sporadic updates I do have an end in mind, which I hope you enjoy.
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Sep 29, 2005 |
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Very nice job. got lost a little in the time line of the story. I reread it I found what I missed. I would have like to have seen/read more about the trainings. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Steele
(Edit) (Sep 29, 2005)
- Thanks a lot. Hope you didn't get too lost in the plot. Still not finished so I hope to get more tales of training in before the end.
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| Reviewer:
slave ruthie
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Sep 27, 2005 |
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more! pleeeeeeeeeeease more! this is so well observed it makes me feel i'm there! i really really love the way you write :) (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Steele
(Edit) (Sep 28, 2005)
- Thanks so much. Praise coming from one of my favourite writers means so much.
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| Reviewer:
nyko
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Sep 20, 2005 |
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an excellent story Steele, kept me excited throughout, where's chapter 8,9,10,.........? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Steele
(Edit) (Sep 20, 2005)
- Thanks for the feedback and apologies for not responding to the others below (I did not know the courtesy). It's great to hear people are enjoying this story. I have another 2 chapters in rough so the wait shouldn't be as long this time.
- Replied by:
Steele
(Edit) (Sep 20, 2005)
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| Reviewer:
Dürrer
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Feb 1, 2005 |
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(10/10)
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| Reviewer:
longrover
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Jan 4, 2005 |
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I like the setup and the accountant. I like the conflicts among the women she will work with, especially Saffire's reactions to the number one and the doctor(?). The doctor is a nice bit of nastiness, since she's probably in the same fix as the others. Enjoyed what I read and look forward to more. (9/10)
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Barbara Anne
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Dec 14, 2004 |
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Somewhat lacking in irony and far too focussed on chauvinist ideals to be enjoyable, in the purely erotic sense. In the authors contrived situation, he neglected the attention to realism, in favour of "this wildly imagined" self gratification. It became too predictable, a story, from the outset! (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Steele
(Edit) (Dec 14, 2004)
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Steele
(Edit) (Jan 6, 2005)
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| Reviewer:
mstrger
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Dec 14, 2004 |
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Love the story. Really lookking forward to more (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Beelzebob
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Dec 13, 2004 |
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Great pacing. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
newwmember
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Dec 13, 2004 |
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I read it today the third time. I like the way how you built the story, just keep going! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Steele
(Edit) (Dec 13, 2004)
- Thanks for the feedback. I'm delighted that you all enjoyed it.
The story will certainly continue, but I must warn you I'm quite a slow writer =).
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| Reviewer:
Ruby
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Dec 12, 2004 |
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Looking forward to what happens next.
Easy to read, follow and get into.
Keep up the great work. Thanks. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Dec 11, 2004 |
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i thought this was a well-written and well thought out story. i hope you continue it! (9/10)
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