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The Rite Author: Doug Smith
(Added on Dec 3, 2004) (This month 49924 readers) (Total 61008 readers)
A battle of wills.

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Highest Rating: (8/10)
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Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Jun 25, 2007
nicely written (8/10)

Reviewer: mgmoore (Edit) Rating: Dec 10, 2004
Good story but a few misused words/typos spell check will ignore mistakes that are spelled right. You need to read it over one last time before you send it in. You'll do better in the next contest. (8/10)
Replied by: sparty (Edit) (Dec 13, 2004)
Hi,
Thanks for the comments. I agree, the story needs a good couple of revisions. I finished it in a hurry for the contest. It came together kinda late.
I will post the revisions when done.
At any rate thanks for the comments, they are appreciated.
Doug

Reviewer: slaveneedledick (Edit) Rating: Dec 8, 2004
Not bad was just expecting more but hell it is only part one. (8/10)

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