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Babysiters Beating
Author: Loki
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(Added on Nov 19, 2004)
(This month 17584 readers) (Total 50673 readers) |
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A stand alone sequel of sorts to 'Patricia's Punishment'. Patricia and Chris find the babysitter stealing, so punish her with hand, belt and cane, and a 9" dildo. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
tomalmorf
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Nov 23, 2004 |
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An excellent tale as a standalone short with an unexpected twist to end ....Or is it the end! Certainly look forward to more of the same. (8/10)
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pangent617
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Nov 21, 2004 |
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The story was good as it went, but there was no transition as much as I would like to give it a higher score, the terse transitions distracted from the flow of the story. There is meat here though and I hope to read more form the author. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 20, 2004 |
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let's see where you go from here (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
christhesub
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Nov 20, 2004 |
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I look foward to reading more (9/10)
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