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Friend or Foe
Author: TK Jones
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(Added on Aug 14, 2004)
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A teen invites his friend over, then he finds out, that his friend is more than meets the eye. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Stefanie1391
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Sep 30, 2006 |
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As it is 2 years old - unfinished (and I hate these!). (5/10)
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jdude
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Awesome.. but this story appeals to almost all my fetish quirks. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
oldboy
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Jun 11, 2005 |
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Good story. Like the concept of the list. But,think about these ideas as you write more. I'm not sure that what is happening to TK would actually be on the list, beating, butt plug? Maybe if his friend would say this was on your list, but this is how we will do that." And since they are, or rather, were friends, does he have to call him "bitch" and the like? (was that on the list?)Would like him to still treat him as if they were friends, it would add to the irony, "I'm only doing this because we're friends!" But maybe I'm missing the point. Please write more, very good start. (8/10)
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bracemaiden
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Aug 17, 2004 |
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It's a decent start, but time will tell how full the idea-tank is. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 14, 2004 |
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hard to give a solid review on what is written so far, i will re-review as you add more chapters (7/10)
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