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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
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Jan 24, 2007 |
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nice story just had a small issue with the sentence spacing (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Oct 4, 2003 |
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Quite enjoyable but the narrative lacked direction. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Feb 17, 2003 |
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There were too few new paragraphs. The story was mostly explanatory, and it barely got around to real action. The spelling was decent. This didn't really excite me all that much, though I am glad to see that someone has written a story with a German named character in it (slight bias on my part). (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
SimonMagus
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Oct 17, 2001 |
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Very good first person perspective. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Daniel |
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Sep 24, 2000 |
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A nice short story about a young girl's perspective on being dominated. Nicely erotic without being crude. (7/10)
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