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Your Master Requires Your Presence
Author: Jack Peacock
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(Added on Jun 9, 2004)
(This month 12608 readers) (Total 25513 readers) |
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An impulsive act following a temper tantrum earns a woman a trip to a unique educational facility, where she is given the opportunity to learn what is truly important. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
nch1307
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Jul 2, 2011 |
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the story makes you forget time and space. (10/10)
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kaeiria
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Aug 26, 2004 |
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potential (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
littleslut
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Jul 21, 2004 |
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well written and captures my imagination (10/10)
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Devilishturtles
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Jul 20, 2004 |
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Excellent Story. Definitley well written and thought out. One can tell that you put alot of time and thought into the writing to get the details correct. The emotion of the main character is portrayed nicely as well, and the story behind the training school, while not humanly possible I wouldn't think, provides the reader with a very nice and very believable fantasy. Superb Job. (10/10)
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bracemaiden
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Jul 17, 2004 |
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The re-capturing idea and scene was a bit hokey. This story is as monotonous as their routine is likely to be. The one saving grace is the cb and the tease that it provides.
I guess I am part of the "others" MistressKali referred to, but I am glad that other's milage does vary.
(6/10)
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| Reviewer:
paindaddy4u
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Jun 13, 2004 |
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I'm very impressed at the thought that went into this, and the training techniques. Great work, very enjoyable. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Jun 11, 2004 |
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WOW (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
countrygirl9662
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Jun 11, 2004 |
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Bravo!!! Very well written, held my attention from start to finish. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
MistressKali
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Jun 11, 2004 |
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Probably not what Others will enjoy, but I found it very well written and very insightful. For Those looking for something to wank with... keep looking. For Those looking for a well written story, do take a minute to read this. Keep up the good work. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
JakBird
(Edit) (Jun 13, 2004)
- The story was written back in 1997 after my own frustration at not finding the type of story I'd like to read on the web. Rather than complain endlessly that someone else failed to entertain me I decided I'd try my own hand at storytelling.
So yes, it may not be the type of story most of this website's readers may care for, but for that small minority that have the itch for Something Completely Different perhaps this will help to fill the void.
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