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The Club
Author: Elizabeth Fulton
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(Added on Jun 6, 2004)
(This month 52170 readers) (Total 65075 readers) |
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A couple tries a bondage club for the first time. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
BigCat
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Aug 7, 2005 |
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Good one (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Jul 25, 2004 |
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WOW!!! What an intense story. It is very well written. The author does an excellent job of placing the reader in the scene. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Jun 10, 2004 |
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Very good and in its own way very titillating. Captures much of the essence of and actual experience. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
GaryWilcox
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Jun 9, 2004 |
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I'm not much for things that detail the 'scene', and I initially kind of shrugged when I read the story codes and the synopsis. Having read the story now, I can see how wrong I was. A great story written by someone with a craft for writing. The opening worried me, it seemed a little sloppy, but when I re-read it now, I realize what the author was doing. I wish I was that clever! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
e.e. norcod
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Jun 9, 2004 |
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I am very suprised that it has taken so long for somebody to review this story as it is a superb piece of erotic masochistic fantasy. The writing is quite good with proper attention to spelling and grammar. The internal dialogue is excellent. About the only suggestion I might make is that the physical effects of the protagonists chastisement could have been made more graphic. However, this is little more than a quibble.
Congratulations on a very good piece of writing. (9/10)
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