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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
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| Reviewer:
WackySpurtz
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Apr 23, 2004 |
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It was the lack of credibility of the wwoman that really kills this story for me. The author really never made it to the inside of the mind of his own character. He would have done better by not trying to portray her thoughts. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
lord_odie
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Apr 22, 2004 |
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Keep 'em coming. I cant wait to see what this lovely willing masocist will do with herself at the hands of the machines next. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Apr 16, 2004 |
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This was a wonderfully creative story. The care balanced out the mechanized auto-eroticism well. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
teamster
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Apr 7, 2004 |
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Amusing tale, although your female protagonist seems perhaps a bit too eager to be credible. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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Apr 6, 2004 |
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Excellent! And, as his Lordship already said: More, please!! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lord Douche
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Apr 6, 2004 |
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Please don't tell me that this is all of the story!
Not to urge you to continue something you weren't planning on continuing... but more! More! :D
LD (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Spitman
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Apr 6, 2004 |
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I can think of nothing I can criticise in this, other than wanting more, and more, and more of it!
This is my favourite kind of thing, and I hope your imagination is up to taking us on more fantastic journeys. (10/10)
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