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Exploding Cupcakes
Author: Harold
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(Added on Mar 28, 2001)
(This month 54780 readers) (Total 79278 readers) |
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Catherine buys an exploding cupcake on credit.She should have paid cash. |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 18, 2009 |
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Never think you've seen it all, because the minute you do, someone comes up with "The Institute for Rapidly Expanding Pastry" and floors you.
This serious tongue-in-quite-bulging-cheek is written in a tone like that of a Big Black Mama scolding you cuz you don't like her cupcakes: you are constantly amazed by the inventiveness of the language that's being used.
Harold's stories, if not highly erotic, sure are fun to read. His characters are witty and blunt, while at the same time showing a willingness to unwillingly participate in the shenanigans the writer concocts for them. Neat.
JJ (8/10)
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yishabeia
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Mar 30, 2008 |
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quite good a story. (10/10)
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Corinna80
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Apr 12, 2007 |
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I could only repeat myself. Again a great story - like most of your work.
I wonder if you're still writing as I would love to read more of your work.
(9/10)
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Dürrer
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Sep 30, 2004 |
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(5/10)
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Alaena
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Jun 13, 2004 |
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It wouldn't be possible in real life, but it's a hell of a fantasy! After I started, I just couldn't stop. I even had to re-schedule my appointment by an hour *grin* (8/10)
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MrMan
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Mar 11, 2004 |
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This story is well written, and has very good character development. However,I found this is a pretty depressing story (except the part w/the Rodeo!) At least it has a decent ending! (7/10)
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SecretWorld
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Jan 25, 2002 |
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Cute, funny and strange. (7/10)
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Llabmik
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Dec 8, 2001 |
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I really liked this story. The torments were ingenious, the rodeo was a cool idea and the struggles of Catherine to free herself while spreading her legs, gobbling dick and accepting the most intimate abuse gripped thoroughly. An excellent story! (10/10)
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ownedgirl
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Oct 24, 2001 |
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FANTASTIC!!! Well written, great plot, maybe the best example of character development on this site. GREAT PIECE OF WRITING. (10/10)
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allstar
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May 2, 2001 |
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Another story which combines an interesting premise with some damn elegant storytelling. A hot story can overcome poor writing, and a well-written story can compensate for a lack of heat- this has both factors right. (10/10)
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bahamut773
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Apr 24, 2001 |
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Starts with a weird premise...but overall a good story. (9/10)
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Engineer |
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Mar 30, 2001 |
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Excellent in any regard! Really good in idea, plot and style. I was fascinated from the beginning to the end. At first, the classification "snuff, extreme" deterred me from reading, but I found the story very tastefully. Even the snuff theme is brought tastefully and moderate. I would appreciate a sequel. (10/10)
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Bug |
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Mar 29, 2001 |
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The story itself is excellent...while allowing for the obvious erotice imagry, it allows the characters to develop over the course of the situational development. And although far fetched in its use of medical technology, it provides enough information to allow for a suspension of belief. I highly enjoyed the story and encourage others to puruse this authors imagination (10/10)
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