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A Collar
Author: kittenfemme
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(Added on Mar 6, 2004)
(This month 23769 readers) (Total 52478 readers) |
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sara receives a wonderful gift from her Mistress. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Wmnwholves
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Mar 24, 2004 |
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I truly enjoyed the first part, and the second was just as well written... It is good to see a story that could be very real, and not written just to see how unreal it could be written... Keep up the good work... And I await to read more.. This is a great series of stories... (9/10)
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Zen
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Mar 22, 2004 |
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It is almost as good as your picnic. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
arain
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Mar 22, 2004 |
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i enjoyes this story immensley...it was beautiful. i enjoy stories that delve into the emotional aspects of bdsm, and i thought this one did it quite well. Kepp up the good work :) (9/10)
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nova
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Mar 16, 2004 |
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This was a lovely piece of work. i thoroughly enjoyed in the interplay between slave and Mistress, the little details that speak of a well-trained slave, but one who is only human, and a strict but fair Domme. This story spoke to me in many ways, but its key theme for me was the love and mutual adoration that exists between them both. Beautiful... (9/10)
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Shellyfemme
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Mar 9, 2004 |
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As always i love your writing. I'm afraid i'm speechless it was truly a beautiful story. (9/10)
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teamster
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Mar 7, 2004 |
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although im not personally into femdom, obviously you write with the voice of experience. the only thing i could ask for is more insight into the characters inner life. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
kittenfemme
(Edit) (Mar 11, 2004)
- Thank you for the valuable advice teamster. Indeed, that's something I often skimp on and regret later.
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 6, 2004 |
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A great issue of BDSMLibrary. Not only a story by that master of abduction and rape, powerone, but a collaring story by that mistress of F/f submission, Kittenfemme. It is amazing how similar the review of these two stories are. Masterful, but you know that I like my stories with a dash of corporal punishiment for the slave girl and twist at the end. But I enjoyed it and you are truly the mistress of your art. Now, bend over and hold your ankles.
Post Scriptum to both kittenfemme and powerone. I cannot tell you how much I admire someone who can write a story without studding it with "Slut", "Bitch", "Whore", etc. One thing that makes a site a truly adult site is the ability of writers to employ their art without resort to such juvinalia. I just finished editing and completing a story for another who insisted on the use of such crudities to give the story "authenticity". Unfortunately, I deferred to their desire. Good Job Well Done. Good BDSM writing does not need to stoop to crudities. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
kittenfemme
(Edit) (Mar 11, 2004)
- Thank you in spades e. e. norcod. You truly know how to flatter a writer... and with good cause. The second part of this story is already complete and will be posted shortly. I hope you enjoy it as well.
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