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Skip Tracer
Author: Skip
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(Added on Feb 1, 2004)
(This month 71412 readers) (Total 99394 readers) |
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Female bounty hunter captures female bail jumper and transports her by van from Chicago to New York City. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
| Average
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Feb 14, 2004 |
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Seems like an interesting start - I look forward to reading more. (Rating subject to change as story progresses of course)<br>
(update). Story is OK. The South American Sex ring seems hokey, but the action is good. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
SKIP
(Edit) (Feb 23, 2004)
- hope you will enjoy Parts 4 and 5
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Feb 13, 2004 |
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Vigilante action with a twist. And a bizarre one at that! "Skip Tracer" is so credible the reader is left wondering if the main protagonist Cindy needs a license to do what she does.
Fortunately for us, the reader does not. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Feb 12, 2004 |
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Then what happened? The author has done an excellent job of getting this reviewer into the boat and while I flop around helplessly waiting for what delicious things are about to happen I can only urge her or him to now stand and deliver as quickly as you can, because we folks have a very short attention span. My initial rating is merely a bookmark to remind me to follow up once you put some meat on the table. I wish there was a special category titled "so far so good" that the reviewer could use instead of trying to read the author's intentions based on a very limited sample of his or her story.
Ugh, the author delivered some stale leftovers. What a disappointment this turned out to be! To this reader it's a bad case of coitus interruptus, translated into poor prose. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Feb 7, 2004 |
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The stage is set. As the story develops, we'll adjust the rating. Just not enough yet to make a real judgement yet. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Grey Slayer
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Feb 6, 2004 |
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So far so good. Interesting and promising premise. Hope to read more. (6/10)
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BrazenBitch
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Feb 3, 2004 |
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i'm really looking forward to the next parts (7/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Feb 2, 2004 |
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I consider this a good start. A competent author should be able to get 5 kb into a story with no more than a mild lesbian groping. Now the big question is what comes next. I for my part would prefer a bit of corporal punishment but I doubt that this is the way this story will go. Oh, well, we just will have to wait for the next installment. (8/10)
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bdsmbill
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Feb 1, 2004 |
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Short, but could get good as it goes along. If it does, I will raise my rating. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 1, 2004 |
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will be very intrested to see where you go from here (7/10)
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