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Rituals Story
Author: Ritual
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(Added on Jan 18, 2004)
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Real life past and present experiences of a woman named Ritual. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Apr 12, 2006 |
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Exiting story with a description of the first sexual discoveries. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
annasherwood
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Jan 26, 2004 |
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very enjoyable story, and one that held my imagination...i particularly would like to hear more about ritual's early experiences! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Jan 21, 2004 |
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This one has its moments, especially in chapter 6. I have a feeling that this is an early work of the author, and I hope with more writing, the style will improve. The same can be said for the proofing, this can be a terrible distraction if there are too many mistakes in spelling and the like. Those curt, jumpy sentences in the beginning were a bit difficult to get used to, but that seemed to smooth out as the author went along. I'm not at all convinced about Magick's intentions or his transformation from bored bedmate to masterful sadist, especially when he seems to be able to tolerate long periods of abstinence from his favorite sport. All that being said, I would be interested in reading more if the knife work/mutilation aspect of things doesn't dominate the fun and games. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Moana
(Edit) (Jan 21, 2004)
- hmmm
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| Reviewer:
Moana
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Jan 20, 2004 |
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I love your life... hope to hear more of it (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Magick
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Jan 20, 2004 |
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Very good story. cant wait for more updates. (10/10)
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