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Weighed
Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
| Average
Rating: (5.5/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
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Jun 14, 2004 |
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when will more posted (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
e.e. norcod
(Edit) |
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Jan 19, 2004 |
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An ultrashort (8kb) story has to be exceedingly well written to succeed. This story fails and fails totally. There is really nothing here to grab ones attention, no character, no color, poorly discribed action, no logic or motivation.
I nominate this story for the "Limp Dick Award" for the least arousing story on this site of 2004. Boccaccio and bdsmbill are frequent and respected reviewers - they hit it on the head. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
(Edit) |
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Jan 18, 2004 |
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Well, it was too short, and without any believeable explanation of how he controlled the women. I didn't care much for it. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Equalizer
(Edit) |
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Jan 18, 2004 |
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The least credible blackmail scenario I've ever read on this site... and that is saying something! Numerous distracting errors right from the opening paragraph. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
(Edit) |
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Jan 18, 2004 |
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Sorry, but I have to disagree with the earlier reviewer. I found the story as unlikely as it was unpleasant. And in need of proofreading -- for example ---- "Then he pulled her by her hairs of his dick."
One really shouldn't find those kinds of errors in a story that takes a couple of minutes to read.
(3/10)
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| Reviewer:
woolfighter
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Jan 18, 2004 |
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The start is wonderful. Hope the whole story will be. (10/10)
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