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The Business Trip
Author: maid jennifer
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(Added on Dec 30, 2003)
(This month 39421 readers) (Total 54957 readers) |
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A man leaves on a business trip and stops at a rest stop, where he finds the young woman there all alone and try's to help her only to find that he becomes her slave. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
Abe Froman
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Sep 1, 2004 |
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There's an interesting plot, but it still seems a bit rushed to me, with not enough setup time, or time spent lingering on the particular scenes, which would really heighten the sense of humiliation and use. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Miss Heidi
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Jan 1, 2004 |
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It seems way to unrealistic that a hard Dominat would be crying in the restroom who has a stable full of slaves. Also I am curious about the whole buisness trip thing, if he is leading a double life etc, Id like to see more. This story has potentual, but it doesn't seem at all complete to me. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
peachmellon
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Jan 1, 2004 |
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i am not bi.. but a female slave. I enjoyed reading the story. Thank you for sharing
~slave paechmellon~~ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Dec 30, 2003 |
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There were some problem with the writing, and what a Dom with a whole stable of slaves was doing crying in the rest area was never made clear, but not bad overall. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 30, 2003 |
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Not a bif Femdom fan, but it was good (9/10)
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