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The Rowandan Tape
Author: Omar
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(Added on Dec 14, 2003)
(This month 65628 readers) (Total 85065 readers) |
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A young American woman receives a tape from a little boy in a Rowandan airport describing the corrupt practices of that government. He asks her to get to the news media back in America. Once back in America officials from Rowanda find out she has the tape and interogate her in an attempt to get it get it back. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 5, 2004 |
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with the story line and theme, could have been much better (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Dec 15, 2003 |
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The basic premise for this story is fine. The build up is acceptable. The editing is definitely not up to snuff; way too many typos, strange sentences, extra words, and all the usual stuff that plagues an author's first draft. The tense used did not seem appropriate. None of these imperfections are fatal to the story, but taken together they make reading this effort most difficult. I am also going to assume that English is not the native tongue of the author, so Omar gets credit for working somewhat effectively in an alien language. If the author takes these observations to heart subsequent chapters could be greatly improved. Finally the amount of heat that this tale generates to date is well below what I expect from a story of this nature. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Dec 14, 2003 |
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This portrayal of a Rowandian/American damsel in distress is well enacted by the writer and deserves reading by any so inclined to be entertained by a narrative that reeks of today's headlines and then some. (7/10)
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