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Novelty
Author: Tracer69
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(Added on Nov 24, 2003)
(This month 48572 readers) (Total 58804 readers) |
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"I got a new Dildo from "The Tool Shed", its 10 inches long , and 3 inches thick! It surprises you completely, a look of fear crosses you face & just before you utter your first words of refusal, I interrupt. Is it for me? |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 27, 2010 |
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A little too rushed for my liking, perhaps the story could have been a bit longer? (6/10)
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burger_01
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Nov 30, 2003 |
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i'm not a fan of the first person style, but its great to be able to find a short story involving size. It was a most enjoyable read, thanks (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Nov 28, 2003 |
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The story was disappointing. It just lacked the build up and seemed to be rushed. The poor grammar did not help either. A proof read and some editing would do wonders. (3/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Nov 26, 2003 |
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I cannot disagree with sm4hg below although I admit that I use the & in reviews for certain linkages. My main problem is that the story doesn't move me (see my review of the accompaning story "I am the Mistress by this same author). (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
sm4hg
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Nov 25, 2003 |
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First I must admit I didn't read the story completely. But I just wasn't able to. The use of "symbols" instead of caracters offends me and turns me off.
This story uses "&" instead of the little word "and", so the author "saved" two taps on his/her keyboard. I've seen a story lately that used more of those "shortcuts". It is simply impossible to read such a thing.
4give me 4 f8ing such things. If you can't write in proper words let it be!!! Please! (3/10)
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