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The Crypt
Author: Jlou
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(Added on Oct 30, 2003)
(This month 61336 readers) (Total 77646 readers) |
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A schoolgirl, attempting to hide from an attacker, hides in an ancinct crypt. There she uncovers a female vampire who places her in bondage and proceeds to turn her into a disciple, against the girl's wishes. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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Rating: (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Seji
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Sep 27, 2006 |
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Though it started off well, it seems shallow. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Dec 10, 2004 |
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This reads like the basis for an Ed Wood movie.
I found it ludicrous, rather than spooky. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 7, 2004 |
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simply did not work for me, not believeable (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Wyn
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Feb 16, 2004 |
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I enjoyed this story, although it was a wee bit short. If the author added more parts to the story at a future date, I'd gladly reconsider revising my rating. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
kittenfemme
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Nov 1, 2003 |
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The clapper, great for all your hidden staircase needs! *grin* I'm kidding! I'm just kidding! Dig this story. It's wonderfully campy and fairly well written. There are too few vamp SM stories. I can't wait for the next few chapters. (7/10)
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stimpy
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Oct 31, 2003 |
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Would have been worth an 8 or a 9 if it were a bit longer... (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
sherfield414
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Oct 30, 2003 |
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New change to the typical vampire story I like it. Alittle too short for my taste. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lord Douche
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Oct 30, 2003 |
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Such an interesting twist on the typical Vampire storyline. Only a few glitches with grammar, but apart from that it's fine.
One thought: I wouldn't classify 18 as "young". It makes people think 13-15. Teen is a better code.
Too short though, if the author writes more, I will gladly revise my rating up. (7/10)
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