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Pooch's Story
Author: Mr. Ed
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(Added on Jun 27, 2000)
(This month 184738 readers) (Total 261150 readers) |
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The miserable slave was punished by her masters and mistresses. Very strong stuff but well written. |
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| Reviewer:
Transformateur
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Feb 20, 2016 |
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<br /><b>Warning</b>: Function eregi_replace() is deprecated in <b>/home/bdsmlibr/public_html/stories/review_add.php</b> on line <b>40</b><br />Very hard stuff. Sometimes to complicated and I dislike the scenes with the public. (7/10)
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teleya
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Apr 24, 2011 |
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Seriously intense. Didnt get a 9/10, because had this happened for real than I think pooch would have been dead by page 9/10. Also I prefer more one on one than a 'party' scheme. But very talented writing and imagination. (8/10)
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JimmyJump
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Mar 10, 2009 |
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A proofreader could have done wonders here, but besides the many mistakes, I thouroughly enjoyed this story.
JJ (9/10)
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azrlg17
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Sep 11, 2008 |
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The story has some hot scenes and sometimes the characters seem real but the something too over the top happens and it spoils the flow. I think a one on one story between Marla and Pooch would have been much better. I like that Marla sometimes shows some mercy or concern but it is much too seldom. Also if she wants to have sex with her often why does she accept that sooner or later Pooch will get VD?
Ed (the character) seems to be an unappealing idiot. Beating his slave while drunk, exchanging a willing sex slave for a deceitful girlfriend and either he's a lying bastard or he lets a woman he loves be tortured beyond all her limits. Also to forbid Pooch to have friends is a sign of weakness.
Marla is not only too weak to cow a naturally submissive woman without massive help from BDSM-cliches, she also is an idiot because her way of preventing Pooch from escaping will probably end with her getting rat poison in her food or a kitchen knife in her belly. It should also be explained why non of her colleagues or friends for which she was punished so much would look for her or post her as missing.
Also Marla mad a big thing of Pooch asking Ed to set her free but I couldn't find that scene (although I only skimmed some of the more extreme tortures).
The story certainly deserves an extreme instead of serious keyword. And additionally snuff, bestiality, watersports, interracial, modification and nc flags. (6/10)
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gojack10
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Apr 9, 2004 |
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I read the whole thing, but it was curiously unmoving. Lots of pointless torture.
Though written well enough, it had much more misogyny than real class. Story left me wishing I had stopped reading it much earlier along. (7/10)
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tedmyg |
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Mar 2, 2001 |
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Very impressed, (10/10)
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pcmman |
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Sep 20, 2000 |
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This is one of the best and most exciting BDSM stories I have ever read.
The use of the slave pooch is incrediable. I would have liked more in the way
of more permenant and extreme bondage but maybe that will come later. (9/10)
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Bobby |
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Sep 15, 2000 |
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perfect (10/10)
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tattoo pat |
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Sep 9, 2000 |
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may be too long but there are a lot of very good ideas in this story. (9/10)
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Engineer |
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Sep 8, 2000 |
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Hard to read due to bad layout (too long paragraphs, remaining html codes). Simply brutal sometimes disgusting, lacking spirit as well as realism. But some scenes are nice to read. (3/10)
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Brocky |
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Aug 27, 2000 |
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Very porly written, and to be honest, I thought the whole Pooch thing was stupid (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ed |
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Aug 25, 2000 |
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Such a wonderfully wicked tale from such a sweet guy. Loved the toilet scenes!! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
George |
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Aug 19, 2000 |
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Difficult to read--quotes and spacing all screwed up. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Paolo rossi |
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Aug 6, 2000 |
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The best story! Author (Mr Ed) is the BEST ONE on the world.... (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Babel |
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Jul 3, 2000 |
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Whew! One of the best stories I have ever read, thx! (10/10)
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