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Miss Yumi Inoue
Author: sarijak
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(Added on Oct 2, 2003)
(This month 18633 readers) (Total 48310 readers) |
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Eighteen years old, beautiful, lonely, shy, quiet. A perfect target for the attentions of her sexy Professor... |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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A few minor flaws that take nothing away from the reading pleasure. Highly erotic and thoroughly enjoyable tale.
JJ (10/10)
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worzel
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Nov 8, 2008 |
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It's taken me about a year or two to find this story again.
I have a number of stories I have downloaded, but this story takes pride of place as an all time favorite! The only thing I could wish for is something similar or the same! (10/10)
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Mr. Pete
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Dec 31, 2006 |
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Excellent work with a few very minor shortcomings. I wish (*spoiler alert*) that the author would have given more details about how Miss Yumi knew about the teacher, and also I felt that the switch of the drinks was contrived. The author wisely left the details to our imagination, and I was able to let go of this problem and enjoy the rest of the story. The turnaround would have been more delicious if the professor's "capture" had been more convincing. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 14, 2004 |
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would have given it a 10 had the story shown the teacher as the victim rather then the student, but all in all GREAT (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Mr. Pete
(Edit) (Dec 31, 2006)
- As usual, this review makes no sense... read the story and tell me that the victim wasn't the teacher?
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Oct 15, 2003 |
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Delicious writing with a well-handled twist. Rated 'only' 8 because I've enjoyed other Sarijak stories rather more than this one. (8/10)
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Emily
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Oct 12, 2003 |
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Wow, a great storyline. An absolutely diabolical tale, wonderfully written and perfectly executed. It has lively touches of humiliation and a slow-burn-like surrender or transfer of the power of manipulation from one character to the other. The ending left me wanting more, which can either be an unfinished effort or simply a great story, making the reader want more. I bow to the ladder here quite easily! This is one of the best stories I have read in quite a while! (10/10)
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crickette
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Oct 6, 2003 |
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I enjoyed reading your story. It was well-written and easy to follow. The subtle feel of the piece was much more effective than if it had been written very heavy handed and blunt. It also proved the old adage, "You can't judge a book by it's cover". (8/10)
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lex ludite
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Oct 4, 2003 |
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This is an impressive piece of work, almost non violent and yet rather horrifying. The role reversal is a good hook and the ending is most appropriate. The author is to be complimented for a very tasteful effort.
I'd also like to acknowledge the good taste of the previous reviewers for putting me on to this enjoyable read. (9/10)
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rcb
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Oct 4, 2003 |
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Well written convincing story -- please keep going (9/10)
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XtremeInk
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Oct 4, 2003 |
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Nice story - more implied sex than actual sex is in keeping with the theme. Love to see more!
-xTi- (9/10)
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kittenfemme
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Oct 3, 2003 |
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I agree with neenee on all counts. More! Please? (10/10)
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pipeshop
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Oct 3, 2003 |
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the story was quite good (9/10)
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ms_2b_used
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Oct 2, 2003 |
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I thoroughly enjoyed, and yes, even a bit mesmerized byt the entire theme as it is really the sumation of my own dream fantasies! I became SO tremendously engrossed in the story that I came to enormously envy 'Kaitlins' enslavement to the young student! Oh well, a girl can dream, can't she?
So hoping there will be a lot more stories like this one as the 'Library' is SO overrun with M/F stories. I feel the provocativeness that only another woman can use over one of her own, and the immense torute she can provide in a wily feminine way is the absolute heaven of BDSM stories!
A new avid fan,
neenee (JaneenMarie O'Brien) (10/10)
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Lord Douche
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Oct 2, 2003 |
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Excellent story. Only a couple of mistakes that could be picked up by proof-reading. Very enjoyable. (9/10)
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