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Let Go
Author: UBisSub
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(Added on Aug 18, 2003)
(This month 9770 readers) (Total 19586 readers) |
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Man seeks mistress and his fears he has to over come. |
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Average (?):  (3.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
bdsmlover
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Apr 25, 2004 |
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ht waqs a great story and i cant wait for the next part. however, the writting/grammar could use a lot of improvement. good job. (3/10)
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trainmanretep
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Aug 25, 2003 |
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I would have given it a 5 or 6 for content, but the really bad grammar takes away from the enjoyment of the story. It is obvious that the author used some type of spell check. The problem is that the words are spelled correctly, but applied wrongly. Too bad the overall concept is quite good. I hope that the author will make an attempt to provide a continuation, hopefully taking any critisism as positive. (4/10)
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abitbent
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Aug 19, 2003 |
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I welcome the effort! This author's English is horrible! Although the content seemed to have some promise, the grammar and just plain English was brutal! Oh, and every sentence ended in an exlamation mark! (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lady Lance
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Aug 19, 2003 |
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For love of Gods, please kill all the 1908324 exclamation marks! When you over use them (like you do here) not only do you annoy the reader, but the marks themselves lose their impact. You also need a better spell check (don't rely on word. You wanted "patience" not "patient" in one line for example) to make this work. I had difficulty enough reading it as it was only to find a ho-hum story that I've read many other times before.
Perhaps if it were cleaned up and tightened a bit it'd be a better read. (3/10)
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