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Sarah's Punishment
Author: Max Smart
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(Added on Aug 16, 2003)
(This month 114556 readers) (Total 160771 readers) |
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Cyrus Marks shares a tale detailing the unfortunate experience of young Sarah McCluskey when she falls into his clutches. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 24, 2009 |
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Against common belief, Irishmen or women are NOT redheads, but have black hair. It's the Scottish who are carrot-topped... so far for the historical genes lesson.
Found the tone of this story at times way too light to be in agreement with what happens,
For the rest, a fairly decent tale, wel written to boot.
JJ (8/10)
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bisarah
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Mar 12, 2005 |
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baby did a bad, bad thing? i just discovered this story today ... i hope you will add to it! it was well-written and there was humiliation ... (9/10)
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mkemse
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Sep 8, 2003 |
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Nothing bettr than a High School Sweetie being humiliated and blackmailed (8/10)
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MrStefens
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Aug 27, 2003 |
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A really enjoyable story and the author brings it along with great descriptions of the sexual humiliation of poor Sarah. I hope we all hear of Sarah's further adventures very soon! (9/10)
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bobanddianne
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Aug 16, 2003 |
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Beautifully creative story development... and of course with erotic humiliation galore. (10/10)
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Lord Douche
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Aug 16, 2003 |
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I love it! Let's hope that poor Sarah gets to "enjoy" many of the fine tools in that punishment room. (10/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Aug 16, 2003 |
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This may very well be the best thing that Max has ever written. After scrolling past his earlier output, much of which has high marks, and recalling the pleasurable times his writing has given me, I have to admit that this is even better than "A cure for Kleptomania". I wish I could offer a suggestion as to how to make this better, but I cannot. All I can do is to hope that Mr. Marks promise to Sarah that the next half of her punishment will be rendered "tomorrow at 1 PM" will indeed come true as a Part II to this story.
The could well become a classic of this genre. (10/10)
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