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Japanese Capture of the Missionaries Daughter
Author: Powerone
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(Added on Aug 7, 2003)
(This month 84489 readers) (Total 134026 readers) |
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The Japanese have invaded the small island in the South Pacific interrupting the lives of the natives and the French missionaries located on it. The soldiers amuse themselves with the young girls on the island. The Commander sees the daughter of the missionary couple and decide that he wants her for his pleasure. This is the story of her degradation by her captors. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 16, 2004 |
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WOW, this is what i refer to as a hot sleeper, it is increable, hope the is more to come of either this story or more similar to it
I like the Japanses Commander not only doing what he doesm but i also like the fact that he tell Lauren what will happen to see her response, adds to the impact of the story (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
eklaw666
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Aug 12, 2003 |
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The innocence of the main character Loren being abused by her Japanese captors is sexually arousing even to most die hard non-patrons of bdsm. A lovable read indeed, keep these kinds of kidnap stories coming. :) (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
cerberus
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Aug 10, 2003 |
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Wonderfully cruel story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Aug 10, 2003 |
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I think this was the best-written of the Powerone stories that I have read. Almost error-free in terms of grammar, spelling and so on. And very hot, especially the first part, which tells of Loren's capture, bondage, and forced march back to the Japanese camp. There it bogged down a little, I thought, with a series of rapes accompanied by the captain's rather monotonous play-by-play. <br>Some missed opportunities keep this fine story from scoring even higher. The beautiful victim, Loren, has little personality; and IMO the Commander and the soldier also would be much more vital characters if they had names and occasionally displayed a little more ethnicity. Be that as it may, folks, if rape and torture is your bag, this is your kind of story. Nice job. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Powerone
(Edit) (Aug 9, 2003)
- That addition was excellent. I wish you would finish what you are writing and let us see your work.
- Replied by:
Powerone
(Edit) (Aug 9, 2003)
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- Replied by:
boccaccio2000g
(Edit) (Aug 12, 2003)
- Powerone's comment about my "addition" referred to a few paragraphs in the original review that expanded upon an incident in his story. The idea was to suggest ways to give the principal characters a little more 'ethnic' character; I left the paragraphs in the review long enough for the author to see them and perhaps give my ideas a little thought, but then excised them. He's written a nice story here, and he doesn't need me or anyone else to rewrite it for him.
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Aug 10, 2003 |
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Nicely done. (8/10)
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