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     Weighed
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    Average 
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    Highest 
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    Lowest 
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    | Reviewer: 
    mkemse
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    Aug 27, 2004 | 
   
   
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        i really enjoyed this (8/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    ron8nl
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    Jan 8, 2004 | 
   
   
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        As you know I am not harsh in my comments. If a story has the content I like (humilation, consent at the end or from the beginning on and it is no non sense) and it is readable and not too slow I rae it an 8. This story is actually too fast and simpy written, but rather too fast than too slow. It is a pitty that it ends here. (8/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    rainee
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    May 11, 2003 | 
   
   
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        An enjoyable read!!! Looking forward to more chapters....If there is any negative at all,it would be that I hope the pace slows a bit, and gives the reader a real chance to get to know the characters and what is inside of them.. (8/10) 
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    Rickgran
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    May 5, 2003 | 
   
   
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        Good Story, fun to read (9/10) 
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    Equalizer
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    May 4, 2003 | 
   
   
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        Enjoyable tale so far. Please continue. (8/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    ladys_maid
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    May 4, 2003 | 
   
   
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        I feel I have to disagree with the earlier reviewers. I found the writing rather lifeless and, combined with less than ideal punctuation, much repetition and little character development, the whole thing left me cold. (4/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    robert216
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    Apr 24, 2003 | 
   
   
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        One of the best (9/10) 
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    kittenfemme
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    Apr 21, 2003 | 
   
   
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        Very nice! More please. (8/10) 
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    BruceBoxer
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    Apr 21, 2003 | 
   
   
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        I really enjoyed this--nice way to begin the day--will have me thinking of training a slave for the rest of the day--nice tale Kelli, thanks. (8/10) 
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