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Turning Michiko
Author: Sir Kane
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(Added on Mar 13, 2003)
(This month 49753 readers) (Total 63472 readers) |
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A chance encounter in a bar turns into a night of pain and pleasure at the hands of a stranger. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
anguisette
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Apr 1, 2003 |
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delicious...absolutely delicious. i completely disagree with the previous reviewer. i think you manage to pull off a tricky writing style with flair and finesse. i want more....is there more? please...post.... (10/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Mar 15, 2003 |
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The author has an excellent command of language and writes well. However I didn't find his manner of story-telling (an alternating first person method) to be particularly effective. Much of the story is repetitive, with Michiko recapitulating events from her point of view after Kane has narrated them. I think that the same purpose could be accomplished using a more conventional third person approach, but it is good to see a fresh approach to a story, even if it is one that is not (IMO) entirely successful. <br>I must also say that I'm generally not fond of stories in which a rape victim become a willing accomplice in her own enslavement. It's difficult for me to imagine that happening in real life (absent prolonged psychological pressure). That said, my compliments to the author for a refreshingly smooth-flowing style. The story was a pleasure to read, notwithstanding what I consider its structural problems. (8/10)
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