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    The Female Body Builder And Her God
    
    Author: Rape and Snuff
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    (Added on Mar 7, 2003)
            (This month 51175 readers) (Total 58644 readers) | 
   
   
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    A man becomes hatefully obsessed with a female bodybuilder. He finds it disgusting that she is putting on muscle like a man and she seems to think she is the equal of a man. He decided to kidnap her and treat her as though he was her god and she was his creation a Fem-Man (female with the muscle of a man) He decides he will use her and abuse her and make her treat him as her god. | 
   
 
 
   
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    | Reviewer: 
    mkemse
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    Apr 14, 2004 | 
   
   
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        what you needed to do, is simply stay with the story line and make it somewhat believable,no "goddess" status or stuff, simply a story with the story line used (2/10) 
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    bdsmbill
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    Mar 8, 2003 | 
   
   
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        I am sorry to give such a bad review, but this was a snuff story, and not so labeled.  Very brutal, nothing erotic about it.  It was also filled with grammar and spelling errors. (2/10) 
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