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Tori's Sense of Purpose and Being
Author: Brenda
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(Added on Nov 18, 2002)
(This month 12937 readers) (Total 29402 readers) |
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A thieving maid is given a choice of instant dismissal or sexual servitude. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 13, 2009 |
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Brenda's stories have a special quality to them, seldom seen in scat-oriented erotica.
Most of the time, such stories are not only smelly due to their subject, but also reek on the writing front, usually having been written in a frenzy of unhealthy lust in an overheated scribbler's mind.
But Brenda's deliveries don't have that frenzy. They are well written and are populated with females who seem to be made out of clay from a Venus pit. Okay, so someone often had a crap in that pit, but the tales are lush and speak to a dark part of our (at least, my) imagination.
Well done!
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Nov 23, 2002 |
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It seems to me that in a story such as this (in which a character is voluntarily totally submissive)there ought to be some effort to explain how the character came to that 'choice', if it is indeed a choice.
But here, one minute we're told that the 'heroine' had never had feelings toward women before, and the next minute she is totally subservient to her lesbian employer. That quantum leap was a little too much for this reader. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Brenda
(Edit) (Nov 24, 2002)
- boccaccio2000g takes its person too seriously... none of my stories are stories - MASTURBATION FANTASIES - sometimes quantum jumps makes for such LOVELY cumms... guess boccaccio# dont have many cums... POOR it... *giggles*
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boccaccio2000g
(Edit) (Nov 24, 2002)
- "guess boccaccio dont have many cums..."
Oh, I see. You're THAT Brenda! What in the world was I thinking?
So, how's tricks, Brenda? Do you come here often?
;-)
- Replied by:
Brenda
(Edit) (Nov 25, 2002)
- Tricks??? Better than yours - real ones too. Come often??? Try all night long... Not you, silly creature - it is an impossibility for your inferior gender, isn't it? Too bad... too sad... What a shame - NOT!!!
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| Reviewer:
wimple
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Nov 21, 2002 |
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Brenda,you write a really exciting story,you really make the story NEED a follow on. (10/10)
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