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Marion's Rape
Author: GoldenGirl
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(Added on Aug 25, 2002)
(This month 51639 readers) (Total 77279 readers) |
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This story goes straight into it. Out alone, a woman finds herself being taken by a teenage druggie, then waking up too find mans best friend enjoying her. |
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Average (?):  (3/10) |
Average
Rating:  (2.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 8, 2004 |
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needs editing, needs to be paragraphed, needs to be started all over again (2/10)
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Engineer
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May 11, 2003 |
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Formatting non-existent. Spelling very poor. Eroticism not at all. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
luc
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Nov 26, 2002 |
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Suitably nasty but it needs a lot of work. Not the least bit erotic.
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| Reviewer:
kiwinine
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Aug 26, 2002 |
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Like boccaccio2000g I found the author could have spent a few minutes to paragraph the story, but still found it a good read. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Powerone
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Aug 25, 2002 |
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I agree with the other rating. It is only one paragraph, lousy spelling and some of the sentence did not make sense. Author made no attempt to write even a mediocre story. An insult to the readers to have to even waste their time going to the story. (1/10)
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- Replied by:
veru_skjava
(Edit) (Aug 26, 2002)
- thank You Sir, saved me the disappointment of reading it!
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Aug 25, 2002 |
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Until the last three lines, this story has only one paragraph; there could be some good ideas in there, but I'll never know.
If the author had bothered to spend five more minutes paragraphing the story, I'd have been willing to spend five more minutes reading it. (1/10)
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