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Something New Author: Moxie Sterra
(Added on Oct 23, 2015) (This month 27635 readers) (Total 27635 readers)
A mistake on the subway leads to a new sort of punishment.

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Reviewer: gkp00co (Edit) Rating: Nov 17, 2015
I agree with Curtis; it's reasonably well-written and if there were any spelling or other grammatical errors, I didn't notice them (an uncommon trait).
My only gripe, which did not affect my rating, is that I found the Master to be beyond petty; let me get this straight: he punishes her because she might have done -- but didn't do -- something wrong but predictable in a situation almost entirely of his creation and accepts no personal responsibility before punishing her for thinking of, but not actually doing, something wrong. What an unreasonable creep. Lots of them in this genre...
If this was my tale, in Part II the guy would descend to new lows of pettiness and injustice that even a submissive girl, accustomed to unquestioningly accepting whatever He says, would recognize as just plain wrong. She bails out, finds a new Master and lives happily ever after. (8/10)

Reviewer: Curtis (Edit) Rating: Nov 10, 2015
As is my habit, I started reading this batch of stories from the bottom up. I'm now glad I did, as this was the first well-written story I've come across, and I'd rather read it near the end than at the beginning.
The characters particularly the heroine are well-defined and easily distinguishable. There's no obession with the heroine's appearance, aside from her clothing. The action was sexy (although I thought it a bit short), and the writing didn't distract me with misspellings, bad punctuation or odd word choices. This story is legitimately an '8', but I'm promoting it to '9' in contrast to its competition. (9/10)

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