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Momma and her Dolly
Author: Good_Girl
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(Added on Jun 22, 2014)
(This month 134394 readers) (Total 134394 readers) |
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During the school year, Siobhan is a well-liked teacher. But during the summer, she\'s \"Momma\'s\" dolly bitch slave, and she loves it. But Momma isn\'t satisfied with having her dolly part-time any longer, and sets out to make her a full-time slave, for good. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Transformateur
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Feb 21, 2016 |
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Only sex, few SM (2/10)
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- Replied by:
Boggart
(Edit) (Oct 28, 2016)
- There is plenty of SM in this story. The fact that it isn't the constant focal point doesn't justify such a low rating.
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| Reviewer:
happyoutcome
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Mar 16, 2015 |
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It is true also that more character development would have helped to know the Dom's inner feelings and thoughts. Doesn't she love her Dolly? I know , too many questions. Good writing ,though.
My other point is to remember that from willing part time submissive role play to pet to slave role play there is a progression to respect and maintain. Not to mention the lesbian thing. She was not at all reluctant and suspicious of and so eager to jump into heterosexual sex; this was a bit out of character.<b><b>
Thanks, and keep up writing. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Nov 21, 2014 |
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Story sticks out thanks to Good Girl's accurate and to the point description of Siobhan's feelings and state of mind.
The same is a bit lacking for the Momma character, sadly.
Part two flows a touch better than part one also, which is promising for part three.
Nice story so far and it looks like the best is yet to come...
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
metaladdict
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Sep 13, 2014 |
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Great stuff I love it, I am hoping for more (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
rhmusic
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Aug 2, 2014 |
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Wonderful story, super well written, thank you so much and I can't wait to read more!
The point where you started the story, the flashback to when they met - very well crafted.
And I *love* that Dolly loves Momma, and wants her and wants the treatment. Obviously there is a lot of unspoken feelings between the two, and I look forward to how that's revealed to each other. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
A_little_too_curious
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Jul 31, 2014 |
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Read the first chapter, and I'm very excited to see where this goes. I like Siobhan's tendency to naturally submit around her Momma, especially during the flashback scene in which they met. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
a.broadsword
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Jul 12, 2014 |
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Good, a bit pedantic maybe, I guess a Lexus is upmarket in the US as its a bit Naff in the UK but otherwise a good start (8/10)
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