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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
earthed_angel
(Edit) |
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Jun 26, 2007 |
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The crude language put me off a bit, as did the rigid writing style. I agree with Wyn, who says that there was little feeling and that it seemed like just a relaying of events instead of a telling of an intense and intensely personal encounter. The fact that both parties are married (and meeting presumably without their partners' consent) also rankled me. I also agree with ladys_maid in that this was more of a sex scene than a BDSM story; a little more emphasis on when Master turned her ass red, or some more protocol would've been nice. A "5" describes this story perfectly: has promise, but needs work. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Mar 27, 2006 |
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Disagree also with Ladys maid. Bdsm can be brutal but it is not a synonym of brutality. Playing with pain of domination and enjoying it can be also different. (8/10)
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chksng19
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Sep 26, 2005 |
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This was not meant to be a BDSM story, just a D/s story; as such, the content was appropriate and very accurate. As this was portraying a mostly online relationship, I thought it to be complete and proper. Not every story has to have torture and fear.
While not perfect, I enjoyed it very much. Very nice work, miss. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 14, 2004 |
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it was ok, but as the titles says 48 hours is NOT enought, needs lots of work. good luck with the next part (4/10)
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Wyn
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Feb 24, 2004 |
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I have to disagree with the previous reviewer. The story, to me, fit the codes very well. There's no rule that states a Master/Dom/Top isn't allowed to call his sub "babe," and I thought it fit into the romantic category.
My problems with this story wasn't with the plot itself, although it was bare on the details (perhaps maybe why a walker was needed and if hindered more intense play). There seemed to be a lack of feeling in the story. Events were just put down, point by point.
Structurally, this story left a lot to be desired. There was a lack of proper punctuation. Sentence fragments were put together, but did not make a good sentence. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 19, 2003 |
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This story contained some surprises, such as the master calling his subbie "babe" throughout the tale and him saying things like "I don't want to hurt you ... babe". This is more like a fairly mild sex story with a couple of half-hearted ass slaps thrown in and the guy referred to as "Master", as if that was his given name. That doesn't qualify it as a bdsm story in my book. All in all, I thought 48 hours was more than enough! (2/10)
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