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Melissa

Part 2

MelissaPart 2 Melissa could barely raise her head which was almost dangling on her chest to see that her 10 assaulters have been replaced by new ones! The new group just stood there for a while commenting on how filthy and slutty she looked with cum dripping from her ass before approaching her. Two of them grabbed her ankles and raised them in front of her and hooked them to two more wires dangling from the ceiling at a wider spacing than the ones her hands were hooked to. Melissa was aware of how this position was adding to her degradation having all her private parts so visible to the cameras but she was more worried by what was going to happen next. She felt so helpless being suspended in this way. Suddenly it started; one of the men grabbed a short leather whip, and stood next to her. He gave her a few seconds to fully comprehend what was coming next before raising his hand up high and bringing it down with full force right on the upper part of her breasts!“AGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH”A rather animalistic cry came out of Melissas mouth. This was by far the most painful strike she had got today. But it didnt stop there, the man allowed her a few seconds before landing another one at the same place”AHHHHHGGGGHHHHHHHHHH”8 more followed, all at the same spot, earning more pain and crying from Melissa before handing the whip to another. He then proceeded to go between her splayed legs, unzipping his pants in the process before plunging his erect cock right into her pussy! Melissaa eyes almost popped out from the intrusion. The guy didnt lose anytime pulling out his cock before thrusting it deep inside till he made contact with her cervix. Melissa was deep in pain from this unexpected assault since her insides were dry and unlubricated. Melissa was simply crying now:“Please,, please dont do it, I beg you , pleeeaaase stop, it hurts, it hurts so bad”The guy kept fucking her for some time as the others watched before dumping his load into her. Melissa could feel  the warm gushing fluid seeping into her insides, and she felt utterly humiliated. But before she could linger on these thoughts, the second man, now holding the whip, started lashing at the lower part of her breasts!“Crack!”and again,“Crack!”, The man continued to lash at the same spot for 10 times earning more painful grunts from her mouth, before proceeding to take his turn between her splayed legs. This time, it felt easier with the previous cum acting as a lubricant, but this only added to her sense of shame and degradation. The masked man took his time before adding another warm load inside her. Melissa kept silent through it all, almost resigned to her fate now. Apparently this didnt seem to please the rest of the guys and so two of them went on either side of her, each grabbing a leather whip. Melissa was almost begging with her eyes not to hit her anymore. The two guys exchanged a few looks and then both raised their arms and landed two powerful strokes one on each breast!“Aghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh”Melissa felt like her chest was going to explode from the pain, as both hits landed smack on both her nipples. The guys gave her a few seconds before landing two more.. Melissa found the strength to put out another high animal like cry. Now a third man came between her legs and started to fuck her while her two tormentors kept on lashing at her giving her a few seconds each time. The guy fucking her was having the time of his life since every time the whips landed; Melissas whole body including her fuck channel was contracting from the pain adding to his pleasure. As soon as he was finished another one took his place. Now the guys formed some sort of a rhythm: Whenever one finished fucking Melissa, he would take his turn in lashing at her breasts. Like that, the guys were never tired, and the lashes kept coming strong. Even when the 10 guys were finished, 10 more followed! Melissaa ordeal continued till the 20 men had fucked her brains out. They finally left her dangling from the ceiling with cum and blood dripping from her cunt and cameras zooming at her damaged fuck hole before taking some time to zoom also on her breast covered in red and blue welts.Jacks eyes were red with tears from what he had witnessed. He was wondering when it was going to stop.“Dont go away just yet, the show is about to begin! “A voice in the video chuckled“What you just saw was just a gentle intro to what we have in store for your daughter. Its time to move into something more “severe”, something extra for our “special” clients who demand, how can I say that, more realistic footage”The voice continued“When this part is over, there will be nothing more to inflict on your daughter. Its a shame we cant keep her for more, but our clients have paid a lot of money to see whats coming next”Jack couldnt believe what he was hearing. What on Earth can they further do? The camera zoomed out a little now as two masked men appeared. They first approached Melissa and released her suspended legs. Melissa thought “God ! is it Over?!”. However, her relief was short lived when the men just left her hanging still by her hands. They went away for a while and came back carrying a pair of new whips.Melissaa eyes almost popped out when they came close and she could see the new “whips”. These were not whips like the ones that had lashed at her for the past 3 hours or so, but models of the old roman scourges!The short whips were made up of three leather thongs connected to a handle and the thongs were knotted with a number of small pieces of sharp metal and broken glass, attached at various intervals. Melissas urethra gave away and urine ran freely between her legs as she starting mumbling:“ PLEAAAASE NO, I BEG YOU, YOU CANT BE HUMAN, PLEEEAAAASE, ILL DO ANYTHING YOU WANT, PLEAASE PLEEAAASE FUCK ME ALL YOU WANT, BUT NOT THIS, NOT THIS, PLEEEAAASSSE!!!!”The guys silently approached her with the whips, standing on opposite sides behind her so she couldnt see them. They seem to be waiting for signal from somewhere to start. Meanwhile, Melissa was getting more hysterical, especially that she couldnt see them anymore, and knowing that in any second, these whips would land on her naked body, damaging it beyond repair.The two masked men stood there motionless for almost a minute during which Melissa had completely lost her mind and any social bounds.“ PPLEEAAASSSE, FUCK ME FUCK ME, BUT DONT HIT ME WITH THIS THING, ILL DRINK YOUR CUM, ILL EAT YOUR SHIT, PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEE………….. “Her please were interrupted with the landing of the first whip on her ass..“ CRACK !!”Melissas eyes rolled, and her body just trembled, before letting out an agonizing scream“ AGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!”“CRACK!”Another one quickly followed from the other side criss-crossing the previous one. Immediately two long red cuts appeared and blood started to seep slowly from them, clearly the effect of the sharp metal and glass pieces.“ CRACK , CRACK, CRACK, CRACK, CRACK “Melissa could take 5 more of which the last 3 were administered on her back, before she fainted. The men briefly stopped only to throw a bucket of cold water on her thereby reviving her. Melissa could only muster a faint groan as she regained her conscious. To add salt to her wounds, she would now take the coming lashes with a wet skin, intensifying her pain. The men though, keen on not having any more interruptions,  attached a cotton swab with a little ammonia into her nostrils to make sure she would be alert for the rest of her ordeal. As soon as they were back into position, they signaled each other and started again“ CRACK, CRACK, CRACK , CRACK  “Jack almost threw up from what he was witnessing. The men kept going as his daughters ass then her back was turned into a completely bloody mess with all the cuts she was receiving. Blood was flowing on her legs before dripping from her legs on the floor. By the time she had received 40 lashes, Melissaa sound was inaudible as her body would only tremble with each lash, clearly going into shock now. Her legs had given away long time ago and she was just hanging limply from her bonds. The whips were simply flaying her skin, tearing into her muscles, and even reaching the bones. 10 more lashes followed before Melissa lost her conscious again.The men stopped, only to replace the cotton in her nostrils with new ones before throwing another bucket of icy  salt-water on her. With that, Melissa came back to her senses only to feel like she was descending into hell as the salt seeped into her wounds. She was now grunting like a wounded animal, clearly not able to talk anymore. Still, the men left her little reprieve, keen on finishing what they started, they now stood in front of her to lay havoc on her otherwise untouched frontal area. Melissa could only muster a whisper“Plea…ase….I….ca..nt”“CRACK, CRACK!!”The First lash landed on her belly while the next hit her just below her navel. Melissas body shuddered as more hits followed, 20 more to be precise. After that, the men turned their attention to her heaving breasts!When the first lash landed on her right breast, Melissa found her voice again, lashing out a scary scream as her breast was deeply cut. The following lash though brought an even more horrendous reaction as one of the metal parts got stuck to her nipple, almost rupturing it in the process. Her nipple was left almost torn into two pieces when the whip withdrew. Whatever was left from it was destroyed 5 lashes later while her other nipple suffered a similar fate 12 lashes afterwards along with her breasts, now unrecognizable lumps of bloody meat!Jack could hold his stomach no longer and just threw up as he was seeing his daughter turning into something close to a suspended slaughtered animal. The men continued for almost 10 more lashes before apparently getting a signal to stop as Melissa was clearly coming to her last breath. The men didnt want her to die just yet, not before the final scene that is!With that, two more guys appeared and lifted her legs in front of her and pulled them wide to expose her clit to the cameras for one last time. Melissa could only whimper as she was sure now it would be over, and she could finally rest for good. The torturers gave her a minute before one of them raised his arm with the whip and landed a powerful swing on her bare clit!“CRACK!”Melissas body spasmed out of control, with the remaining urine in her spurting from her now bloody fuck hole. The following lashes tore her reproductive organ apart. Somewhere after 12 or 13 lashes, her body stopped jerking. Melissa, having lost so much blood already, had lost her conscious, for the last time. The guys simply stopped, and left her legs to fall on the ground as the cameras zoomed out to show Melissa or whatever remained of her. Her whole figure was a bloody mess. Her breast were completely torn apart and some parts were even showing the rib cage bones below while blood continued to drip on the floor from her ravaged cunt. With that, the tape stopped. Jack just stood there with a solid emotionless look, before taking a gun out his drawer, pointing it to his head, and releasing the trigger…THE END,,    


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