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Mark's Coerced Womanhood
Author: Denise C
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(Added on Apr 22, 2012)
(This month 20344 readers) (Total 33412 readers) |
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Mark begins to date Emily and chooses to give in to her first perverted demand. This starts his descent into becoming Megan, a submissive lesbian who becomes increasingly degraded by Emily. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Jorgy444
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Aug 27, 2012 |
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Your writing was pretty good, few grammar mistakes
and spelling errors. Development of characters was
okay as well. Megan and Emily were a married couple but had no other real connection in the tale, it was just one scene to another with no passion, not erotically charged! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
urdbm
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Apr 28, 2012 |
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I liked it a lot! quite interesting evolution well written (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Apr 24, 2012 |
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Good premise & a descent story. I would have liked to see more emotion from both characters, as it seemed a little dry. I was enjoying the story until it started skipping years & then just became a list of what Emily did to Megan. There never really seemed to be any love or highly erotic moments. Then we had an odd & abrupt ending. I would have rated this story lower, but it had good writing & the author spent quite a bit of time on a story that had good length. Therefore I raised my rating for a quality effort by the author. All in all...worth the time to read. (7/10)
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