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the breaking of neha
Author: Pandorius999
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(Added on Dec 31, 2011)
(This month 18340 readers) (Total 41511 readers) |
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Neha's our school head girl bitch. But she learns to respect seniors, the hard way....written in parts..... |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
himannv
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Jan 2, 2012 |
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I admit I liked the story for most part despite the poor grammar and the complete lack of Title Case anywhere. It would have been much better if the grammar was fixed I think. I lived in India for a couple of years so I can relate to a few aspects of it. Get an editor to go through it or just improve the writing yourself and this would be a decent story. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 1, 2012 |
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Must agree with the Major. Except for the "has some promise" part.
"The Breaking Of Neha" is the umpteenth equivalent of "Z" grade teen slasher movies. While they may have a touch of interest to some, they're still awfully made.
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Major Littmann
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Dec 31, 2011 |
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I think its written in text speak jive by someone who speaks Jive as a second language.
Otherwise a typical womaqn hating rape story.
Really I thought it was pretty horrible but it has some promise and the writer could most certainly improve it. Getting an editor would be a good starting point. (5/10)
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