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Adrielle’s sacrifice
Author: Dr Troy
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(Added on Oct 8, 2010)
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Young teenage girl mets an old perverted man who feeds her to his giant python. |
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Average
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| Reviewer:
HuManiMal
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Nov 22, 2011 |
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Simply bad. Every category you can think this fails. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jul 4, 2011 |
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i know the stories on this site are someone's fantasy, but this story is just too far fetched for me. Also we were first told the snake was forty foot long then it was only twenty four foot in length, ok so which was it? If the author can not be bothered to be consistant in his own story i cannot be bothered to read his stories! (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 8, 2010 |
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Cathyst11 recently posted a story (her first) involving a python with an appetite for large chunks of girlie-meat, so I'm a tad intrigued then when a similarly themed story pops up so soon after...
Like I said before, people need to get their inspiration from somewhere, but "Adrielle's Sacrifice" can hardly be called that. Insipid, yes, but not inspired.
Ludicrous would also be a word which springs to mind.
While well written, I'll have to disappoint the author; that odd sound in the background was my imagination snapping because of having been stretched a tad too far.
Since Troy seems to be a doctor of some kind, maybe he/she can mend it with another story. Or he/she can fuck-up my imagination for good, of course.
JJ (6/10)
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