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Hired Hands
Author: Samsara
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(Added on Aug 23, 2008)
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Paloma simply wants to escape poverty in Mexico, smuggling herself across the border in search for work. Finding it at a hotel, Paloma thinks she's struck gold, until her employer takes issue with her Green Card number. |
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Chuckdom19
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An interesting premise and fair start, although you could use an editor to fix the many grammatical and spelling errors. (i.e. the farewell you spell "adoo" should actually be "adieu", from the French). Hope you find time for more. (7/10)
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