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    | Reviewer: 
    DungeonMaster6
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    May 17, 2008 | 
   
   
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        Even though the writing could be improved, this story got right to the point, which is what I'm looking for. If anybody wants to get into a D/s relationship, you better read this first. (7/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    abitbent
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    Apr 10, 2008 | 
   
   
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        The ideas presented are fun and original however you'll have to wade through lots of atrocious grammar and spelling mistakes.  (5/10) 
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