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The Life of a Night Lily
Author: Naug.
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(Added on Jan 3, 2008)
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After world war three the Indian Commonwealth resides as one of the world's leading superpowers. Guided by a religiously Artificial Intelligence that places each citizen where he or she can maximize their potiential to serve the Commonwealth. Follow young Ayanna Farah as she comes to grips with her new life on the Academy of the Night Lily, where she is trained in the way of the courtesan. |
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| Reviewer:
knuttunk123
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Feb 14, 2009 |
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My congretulations naug, your story is one of the best! I've checked the library every time to see, if there is a new chapter. I hope, we won't have to wait another year!!! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Naug
(Edit) (Feb 15, 2009)
- heh :) Sorry about the long wait. My motivation for writing has been kind off hit and miss the last year and I've been busy. If it's any consolation I have 4 more chapters half done as well as another, much shorter and darker, story half done as well. You can expect the next chapter shortly.
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JimmyJump
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Jan 31, 2009 |
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Very nice to see a writer who clearly took the time to come up with a tale not solely for the sex, but purely for the fun of writing a good, well balanced story.
"The Life Of a Night Lily" is truly majestic, both in its general set-up as in its abundant details, the latter covering all the bases, from the clothing and surrounding to the minute quirks and feelings of the folks populating this adventure.
But I feel that where the author succeeds best, is in his/her exposure of the world after its last cataclism, painting an accurate picture of a re-shuffled society without going out on a ledge to come-up with some comic-book sci-fi mumbo-jumbo, while at the same time penning down some delicious dialogues.
Extremely well done, I hope to see more content added in the not so distant future.
Just try to keep the spelling errors in check...
JJ (10/10)
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JimmyJump
(Edit) (Feb 12, 2009)
- I am glad to see that Naug has added a new chapter. Just finished it and I must say that the wait was worth it. The same high quality writing as in the former chapters.
Well done again, Naug!
JJ
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genwolf001
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Jan 25, 2008 |
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A long time lurker but frequent reader, I was moved to revive my account to review this story, IMHO one of the very best beginnings I have read. It certainly pushes most of my Buttons but more than that is fantastically well written with an intriguing yet believable premise.
I really hope there is more to come of the same quality. (10/10)
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robart
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Jan 13, 2008 |
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I read this story by pure coincidence, for its storycodes are not the ones I usualy search for. But found it was the best read I had in several month.
Ironicly it was the first chapter which got me hooked up - though it has no actual sex in it.
But it has the most brilliant introduction to the main character, a vivid introduction to the unusual setting and a intensity that made me nearly shiver. This chapter wouldn't get out of my mind for a whole day.
In the second and third chapter, "the life of a night lily" drops a little. It certainly does not get bad, but the story-elements seem far more common than the imaginative setting of the first chapter.
I certainly will check for updates of both this story and this author.
Oh, and Nauq: Thank you for this story. I've read hundreds, and this is the first one I actually review. The first chapter got me thinking for the rest of the day. If it was not for the clearly under-age participants, I would have considered making short animations based on this story. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Naug
(Edit) (Jan 13, 2008)
- Between the length of the introduction and the age of the participants(something i wrestled with for a while myself), I had a sinking feeling I wouldn't get any reviews at all.
Thank you for your words, it is very motivating to know that at least someone other than myself and one of my friends appreciate my writings. Exactly what in the first chapter is it that you find particularly captivating? I do know that the story slowly moves to more classical themes prevalent in the typical BDSM story. I like most of these themes, and I will include them. I am however also a sucker for drama and likable characters, so I will do my best to portray different characters at the school and to keep things interesting with other means than just sex. I'm not sure if I have the capacity to pull this off, as this seems to evolve into something a bit larger than I had first imagined.
Cheers :)
/Naug
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